Sunday, February 14, 2010

Sunset

Good morning to you, Valentine
Did you count your stars, like I did mine?
We started with excitement, flowers and wine
with a “Good morning to you, Valentine.”

The day is past, the sun is set
The morning light went by so quick
the afternoon was quiet and dull
And I wept with my head on your shoulder.

Who knew the dark would be this cold,
That distances would be this bold?
The night has come, to test our might
Good night to you, my Valentine.


3 comments:

Velu said...

Nice. Liked the change of time and emotions through the lines.

Happy Valentines.

Cheers,
Anuj

anhilaire said...

good poetry... I love the last stanza most... keep writing...

Galaxy Hydrangea said...

Very heartfelt, this one!
<3

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